Tuesday, May 29, 2012

Tears Reflection Comments

Rating: 4.5

Tears reflection

Moving sand, on them, I stand
Deserted In driest self esteem
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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 June 2018

It is glad that Being low for some reason and you lost in pain lately and it inspired you to healbyourself again. A beautiful poem shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Farah Ilyas 25 May 2013

So glad to read that u have recovered yourself after tolerating too much phase of time...sometimes we fail to recognize the original one but nothing remains longer, one day it will be over one way or another, time elucidates everything...brilliant poem Soul....10/10: -)

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Kelvin Owusu 03 December 2012

an amazing piece of poetry that's all i can say

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Terence George Craddock 16 August 2012

Tears reflection is cast in the mist of the mirror mind which must transcend the impaling of the torturous now into possibilities of new beginnings new love new life the birth of new happiness when we tear through the dead skin of a past life we must outgrow into the newborn body of souls which must embrace the illumination of each days new light.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 07 August 2012

I'm so glad you recovered from this ordeal.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 10 July 2012

i just have no word to say to you soul....that is something really amazing!

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Jinal Oswal 29 June 2012

You know what there are times in our lives where we are so much in pain, that no one can ease it... but are own words can.... it really shows how strongly we can get up if we decide to... Wonderful Soul, amazing in fact! !

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Ramesh Rai 23 June 2012

too back to post comment. lovely, beautiful but i can not explain like you but I do realise.Rainy tears soon wet my toes And drained my sober continuously Soaked me in the tears sea. Grand application of words in this poem.ten to the power 10

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Subodh Pandey 21 June 2012

a lovely write dear a perfect ten

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Rekha Mandagere 20 June 2012

Mind often forgets to recognise the great things which are right in front of them but wanders in aimless past.it is a great flaw of human kind. How beautifully this soul is presenting in his grand style.I really love the depth and the sentiments behind this great write. A 10 is enough? Tell me soon :)

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Hans Vr 19 June 2012

Dear Soul, This is a wonderful poem with a great wisdom inside. Sad to hear that you were in pain but so proud to see how you rediscovered self and soul. I agree that sometimes sadnesses come our way, they can be overwhelming for a while, feel like desert but soon a small oasis appears and like a firefly in the dark of the night, a small oasis in the desert is sometimes enough to lift us out of the gloom, no matter how dark or dry it still is around us. Excellent poem. I hope many many people in this world who feel lost read this. It is very inspiring and uplifting.

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Farah Ilyas 13 June 2012

Front of these eyes All white, faded sight No Images, left, up or right The only one is below, There's someone The one that once was mine Self reflection in another side i like these lines very much, your poem is rich in vivid imagery, philosophy, ideas & emotions, well done indeed a heart touching poem

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Harindhar Reddy 11 June 2012

Soul, it's astounding this poem of yours is completely variant other poems. It is more philosophical carrying hidden meaning in it. It caught my eye and mind. It reflects your inner ideas and strong message that people around us will try to break our confidence by different traps using some kind of baits, which call rattrap pedlar's philosophy. But as for now, fears deserted mind Images seems blur, make pain so real Apart from philosophy I can see music and rhythm unlike your other poems which is a welcome as it fascinates a reader to read to again again.................... Hats off to you friend!

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Sharad Juneja 10 June 2012

Soul it's amazing.............. I have written a similar one on similar lines 3 yrs back...will place it soon....urs is subtle beautifull.. every word is a gem i loved every word of it :)

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Captain Cur 06 June 2012

Sand does feel like it is moving when we stand on it by the sea. Perfect intro for the moving vastness of pain, soul and self sorrow and then ultimate rediscovery of purpose and life in this poem.

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Valerie Dohren 04 June 2012

Brilliantly written poem, very insightful expressing a journey away from self reality and back again.

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Guess Who 03 June 2012

Brilliant poem........ Very enthusiastic and meaningful i liked it so much especially it is plenty of imagination On this finest sand, i still stand When all energy now left broken By the burning sun in front So another step has frozen Burned strength with aches pain Illuminated rays, behind these eyes Pigmented my vision for years But as for now, fears deserted mind Images seems blur, make pain so real Dark as red rose to be lachrymose Bleeding emotion wash out all sights Dissolves my colorful thoughts Be in the drops by my eyes pressure Free fall touching my dry heels Rainy tears soon wet my toes And drained my sober continuously Soaked me in the tears sea Very beautiful poem i love it keep the good work i'm awaiting your next poem (forgot the name) keep the good work up........ Guess Who Wrote This Comment

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Kasia Fedyk 03 June 2012

Thank you so much! Your poem is Divine beautiful, it flows from the depth of the soul experiencing pain and allowing it to be accepted and embraced and slowly healed with the majestic power of words and the Divine Hand upon it. Beautiful and so inspiring. Love and Light. Blessings!

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Elena Sandu 02 June 2012

Brilliant! Thank you so much for sharing this with us. I feel it like a gate, my soul enter and travels with each read in a different way. Thank you!

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 30 May 2012

This is a masterpiece my friend, profound message and very insightful poem.keep inspiring us man... Siya_! !

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