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A New Version

Rating: 5.0

Time and now we often
Feel worn out of days work
And wish to take a long nap
Until we feel better.

But the busy schedule often
Stole all that was always better
With illusion of earning work
Sacrificing the rejuvenating nap.

Laboring for the most cherished work
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A New Version
Monday, June 1, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: hope,inspirational
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I liked the beauty of the image and the piercing light conveys the positive vibes through the branches and the the long hanging symbiotic creepers gave it the look of fullness and the water fall instill life made me to see the new version in everything.
Photo by Eka Rizal Fikri on unsplash.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

inspiring.........a marvelous thought.......10+

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Chuy Amante 01 June 2020

I enjoy your comment below the poem as much as your restful-nap poem. peace, thank you for kindness

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Varsha M 01 June 2020

I'm happy that you enjoyed both and I enjoyed your magnificent poetry. Thank-you

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 June 2020

good sanguine..... flying flying there independence wings of the pen will catch the heart in the rising time of sun with blooming new nerves

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Varsha M 01 June 2020

Awesome beautiful Sir...good sanguine flying...wings of pen will catch the heart...with blooming new nerves. It's so encouraging thank-you so much.

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