Cristian Marian Necula

Rookie (1994 / Constanta, Romania)

A Tranquil Rose - Poem by Cristian Marian Necula

As I sit on a bench
In a park,
Meditating and relaxing,
I see something which
Lies above,
Pristine and pure,
An organism whose
Will never be touched,
For it is,
That's how it is,
That's how it always
Will be.
Just because you
Try and touch it,
Doesn't mean that,
You will become as
As a tranquil rose...

Comments about A Tranquil Rose by Cristian Marian Necula

  • Romeo Della Valle (9/9/2012 1:01:00 PM)

    WELCOME to the Poetry World! What a great entrance you have made with the posting of this well penned and poignant write! Clearly, your talent and writing skills are excellent! 10+++ Thank you for sharing dear Cristian and keep it up! Keep giving the Poetry World more food for thought! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! (Report) Reply

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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (8/26/2012 12:02:00 PM)

    You will become as
    As a tranquil rose...
    - lovely lovely 10
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  • Alon Dy (8/26/2012 9:23:00 AM)

    nice poem. good ideas. Please feel free to comment and rate my poems. Thank you (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 26, 2012

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