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A Tranquil Rose

Rating: 4.0

As I sit on a bench
In a park,
Meditating and relaxing,
I see something which
Lies above,
Pristine and pure,
An organism whose
Innocence,
Will never be touched,
For it is,

Intangible.
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Romeo Della Valle 09 September 2012

WELCOME to the Poetry World! What a great entrance you have made with the posting of this well penned and poignant write! Clearly, your talent and writing skills are excellent! 10+++ Thank you for sharing dear Cristian and keep it up! Keep giving the Poetry World more food for thought! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 August 2012

You will become as Unsullied, As a tranquil rose... - lovely lovely 10

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Alon Dy 26 August 2012

nice poem. good ideas. Please feel free to comment and rate my poems. Thank you

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