keliemai toogood


Alone - Poem by keliemai toogood

Let me take you to a place
Where no one has to see your face
Look at the stars
The moon
The sun
Where there is peace for one

You can hear the rustle in the trees
You feel the warm air breeze
You can smell the flowers oh so sweet
You feel the earth beneath your feet

Let me take you to a place
Where no one has to see your face
The sea
The sand
The sky so clear
A place where there is no fear


Comments about Alone by keliemai toogood

  • Neil Marsden (10/12/2008 2:24:00 PM)

    Super piece of Poetry!
    If you know the location of this beautiful place that you describe so well please let me know too.

    Thank you! Neil.
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  • Emily OldhamEmily Oldham (10/11/2008 4:26:00 AM)

    this poem is so beautiful... i like the end of each stanza... keep writing, thanks
    Athena

    *** words will change the world ***
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 11, 2008



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