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And A Pinch Of Happiness

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The tiring day long fight
The falling heven of mine
Rolling tears in my eyes
Just a pinch of happiness suffice.

Over the broken desires
Over the shattered dreams
Over the failing hopes
Just a pinch of happiness suffice.

When I could not see a way out
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And A Pinch Of Happiness
Saturday, November 7, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: happiness,pleasure,worthy
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Today's challenge is happiness. Let's see how it works
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 07 November 2020

'Rolling tears in my eyes Just a pinch of happiness suffice.' this is a very insightful powerful observation a pinch is so small, yet life survival, the difference between life and death with severe injuries, can be just a pinch of choice of desire, of the will to live a pinch, a pinch, a pinch, until the possibility of hope and a better life, not just survival may dawn

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Terry Craddock 20 November 2020

'Life takes a three-sixty turnover Suddenly life becomes more meaningful And the pages got painted in golden Just with a pinch of happiness I bore.' 'the pages got painted in golden' this reminds me of my young childhood next to our drive the neighbour had a hedge, but the leaves were dark green, some going dark black, I got out a large tin of yellow paint and painted the leaves a golden yellow :)

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Terry Craddock 28 November 2020

I wrote the poem 'Childhood Days Dull Leaves Painted A Golden Yellow', inspired by this comment on the poem 'And A Pinch Of Happiness', by the poet Varsha Madhulika and dedicated to Varsha Madhulika.

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Terry Craddock 20 November 2020

Part 1 Found Absolute Determination Claims Miracles absolute determination is not believing a doctor's impossible absolute determination is trying trying unending trying absolute determination is not admitting to the impossible absolute determination is not giving up when prayer fails

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Terry Craddock 20 November 2020

Part 2 A Pain Dirge In Pinch Impossible Attempts yet life survival differences between life death with severe injuries can be just a pinch of choice of desire the will to live a pinch a pinch a pinch until the possibility of hope and a better life not just survival may horizons dawn a pinch is so small a pinch can be tiny tiny minuscule infinitesimal Inspired by the poem 'And A Pinch Of Happiness' by the poet Varsha Madhulika. Dedicated to the poet Varsha Madhulika.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 January 2021

A fascinating title.... appreciated!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 January 2021

A fabulous poem... delightful poetic expression

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Terry Craddock 20 November 2020

I wrote the poem 'A Pinch Of Happiness Can Be A Miracle Seed', inspired by the poem 'And A Pinch Of Happiness', by the poet Varsha Madhulika and dedicated to the poet Varsha Madhulika.

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Terry Craddock 20 November 2020

Found Happiness In A Flash in an eyeblink in a heartbeat in a smile in an instant in a jiffy in a moment in a split second less a nanosecond a life changing wink life can spin like a top in birth of golden light in sunrise possibilities in pot of gold at the end of a raindrop prism rainbow glass ceiling shatters broken light speed is snail speed when mind heaven is attained paradise love ecstasy bliss Dedicated to the poet Varsha Madhulika.

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Terry Craddock 20 November 2020

Part 2 Found Absolute Determination Claims Miracles absolute determination is endless trying trying trying attempts absolute determination is sheer blind impossible trying endless absolute determination is a needle in haystack found miracle absolute determination is indomitable lionhearted invincible Inspired by the poem 'And A Pinch Of Happiness' by the poet Varsha Madhulika. Dedicated to the poet Varsha Madhulika.

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