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As Twilight Meets Night

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In the dimiming light of twilight
Red and pink skies light with delight.

Sea meets sky in a horizontal equation
Enfolding light with night.

Shutters open to the cosmos
Exposing the beginning from its end.

Here is the moon so soon

Dancing silvery light upon the oceans.
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Sunday, December 6, 2020
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fran Waller 06 December 2020

A lovely poem, Robert.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 06 December 2020

This is quite a lovely poem, masterfully crafted. To my List!

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Deluke Muwanigwa 06 December 2020

My friend i am coming to Melbourne to shake your hand....if there was no Covid. Lol. Good poetry. Internal and external rhyming. Beautiful. The the " dawn and yawn" ...why didnt i think of it first. Great stuff. Going for 2nd reading.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 December 2020

A picture of a magical twilight and night. Beautifully written with compelling imagery.

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Nature and Poetry at their very best! ! ! Excellent write with superb imagery.

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Jane Rothwell 02 April 2021

A true masterpiece.

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Anjandev Roy 28 December 2020

Brilliant piece...

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Robert Murray Smith 28 December 2020

Thank you my friend. Glad you liked it.

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Sandra Feldman 07 December 2020

From twilight to dawn, Never a more perfect And scenically beautiful Description, Have I ever read, Or heard. Poetry and visionary perfection.! Thank you so much.

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Mihaela Pirjol 07 December 2020

Vivid and descriptive images in a languid rhythm of words, composed before the sunset: those splendid moments...

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