Neran Sati

Autumn's Low - Poem by Neran Sati

it red hair's slowly fallen

it fingers - black n wriggled

seizing sky

- succumb to freeze!

Topic(s) of this poem: autumn, old, trees

Form: Imagery

Comments about Autumn's Low by Neran Sati

  • Seema Jayaraman (11/4/2015 5:30:00 AM)

    A good write.. but not sure whether this fits the technicalities of a haiku (5-7-5 syllable meter) ..though I am not an expert, please do read up on haiku's.. thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

    (11/4/2015 10:34:00 AM)

    Thanks for your comment Seema!

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 4, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 3, 2016

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