Vaughn Bekker

Rookie - 0 Points (26 march 1972 / Empangeni)

Broken Bed (Light Humor) - Poem by Vaughn Bekker

I have to fix this place we sleep
Because so badly it does creek
For whenever at night love we make
It sounds like the bed we break

So now i fix the bed we broke
Cos the noise it makes is no joke
Its so noisy it does strike fear
That maybe even the neighbours hear

Even when we try to be as quiet as a mouse
I sounds like we breaking down the house
So when we get busy and do the deed
It starts to sound like a galloping steed

And again the bed i do fix
so quietly we can get up to our trix
now i try to fix the bed we did break
that no more noises it does make

determined now i am to fix this bed
because it`s really starting to mess with my head
so o my gosh, for goodness sake
i hope again this bed don’t break

i`m trying to fix it really strong
so that it will last really long
and at night when we get going
it will be quiet as if it were snowing

never again and no more
will the noises be heard next door
so now at night when we do sleep
no more will our bed be the one to creek


Comments about Broken Bed (Light Humor) by Vaughn Bekker

  • (4/25/2012 7:30:00 PM)


    i like this one, light humour it was :) (Report) Reply

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  • (5/27/2010 11:53:00 PM)


    That was very cute :) . Light humar, indeed. Your good. Thank you for sharing. :) .. you really are a good poet. Thanks again. Blessed be. (Report) Reply

  • (5/23/2010 2:09:00 PM)


    i`m trying to fix it really strong
    so that it will last really long
    and at night when we get going
    it will be quiet as if it were snowing

    its really a meaningful poem with rich idea..loved it
    (Report) Reply

  • (5/21/2010 7:36:00 PM)


    this is awesome I love it (Report) Reply

  • (5/21/2010 9:30:00 AM)


    Yes, quite amusing and very entertaining. Nice. (Report) Reply

  • (5/14/2010 4:40:00 AM)


    I am amused! The rhymes work well in humor. (Report) Reply

  • (5/13/2010 11:14:00 PM)


    Highly amusing poem, and most would say that they agree. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 10, 2010



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