I am 20
I am eating
chocolates
ice-creams
pastries
My lips have
sweet honey.
I am 20
I am fond of
pets
stray dogs
butterflies
distressed
animals
My heart has
full of passion.
I am 20
I have
twinkling eyes
turned up nose
smooth skin
sparkling teeth
I am the
emblem of beauty.
I am 20
I am drawing
attention of
boys
men
old men
dejected men
I am the
myth of love.
I am 20
I found my
perfect mate
I am caring
sharing
completing
the bliss of life.
I am
no more
adored
loved
I am
turning 40.
You traverse a good part of life in this one....20 to 40...wow is the word...read my poem called I AM.... U may like it
it was nice to read your poem, the end was surprising and unexpected :) be blessed
hi i loved this poem and the end is very very true and nice ending.
beautiful depiction of a young girl who turned in to twrnteens...wonderful to read...pretty work, love this poem! 10+++
It was said well about the attitude in the age of 20 and 40, Well designed to read, nice.thank you
Thank you so much Sir for reading my poems. Your comments are valuable for me.
Mubeen I agree with Joyce. Next time you are eating chocolates close your eyes and dream you are the most beautiful flower in the garden of life. I hope your dream comes true.
better to be loved than adored is'nt it...a very sweet poem...enjoyed every bit of it...taking it into my favs
I like joyce's outlook- should everyone only see it this way..10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
beautiful write..worth a smile I love this..nice style..unique thoughts At 40, I guess you are still lovely and being adored....smile 10++ thanks a lot... Lovelots, Maia