Kelly Kurt

Gold Star - 201,439 Points (1/14/1958 / Cedar Rapids Iowa)

Electricity (Tanka) - Poem by Kelly Kurt

Fundamental force
Propagating at light speed
Powering the world
Dangerous if not controlled
Felt when lovers’ eyes first meet

Topic(s) of this poem: life, nature

Form: Tanka

Comments about Electricity (Tanka) by Kelly Kurt

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (9/11/2015 7:04:00 AM)

    Truly, powering the world but dangerous too (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (9/11/2015 10:14:00 AM)

    A force to be reckoned with

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/8/2015 1:12:00 AM)

    Dangerous if not controlled
    Felt when lovers’ eyes first meet......Oh! what a great meaning inside it. Romantic diction and depiction dear Kelly, I like this poem very much. ...........10.
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    Kelly Kurt (9/8/2015 11:00:00 AM)

    Thank you my dear friend. The Tanka allows for a shift that accomplishes multiple meanings

  • Ruby Mostazir (9/7/2015 1:23:00 PM)

    Nice :) (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (9/7/2015 5:18:00 PM)

    thanks, Ruby!

  • (9/7/2015 1:10:00 PM)

    Electrifying work.
    The final line gives off sparks.
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    Kelly Kurt (9/7/2015 5:19:00 PM)

    Thanks, Sandra. That was my intent.: -)

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 7, 2015

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