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Heartache

Rating: 4.4

My heart stops.
Beats again, but faster.
My eyes see you,
seals your image in my mind.
My ears hear your voice,
a sweet rumble that evokes unknown emotions.
My hands sweat,
the thought of touching you crosses my mind.
My feet freeze,
if i move i'll lose a moment with you.

My legs shake; my heart breaks.
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Paige S 20 April 2009

Nice read. It can be hard not kknowing if someone you care about feels the same way.

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Hey londiwe i read your poem it's scary that feeling of nowing they mite not feel dasame way u do LOVE IT! ! ! DADDY'S LITTLE GIRL

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Kirsten Oliver 17 April 2009

as i said i would comment and that was a good poem even i a dark poetry wroter myself loves that poem BRAVO! ! !

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Kiran Kumar 17 April 2009

good poem i like it this gives the strong feelings of love a long poem(in feelings side) is composed in short lines

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Jenny Sar 30 March 2009

you get like that when you have stronge feelings but then come to love... good poems

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Paige C 17 July 2009

I really like it. nice use of words. i lovedhow u put it together.

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Subroto Chatterjee 24 April 2009

Spoken like a true Poet. And there's no substitute to experience. None whatsoever... Cheers. Subroto

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Beth Skin 23 April 2009

This is such a beautifully written poem i could feel all the emotions as i read it

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sky dreams 21 April 2009

i like how you use the imagery of your own body to show your feelings for someone.. nice write!

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james Xane 20 April 2009

Guess I can understand how painful it is, so true... nice and simple flow of feelings here. Good work, keep it coming.

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