poet Valerie Dohren

Valerie Dohren

Inside Of You

Let me dwell inside of you
for just a little while
Feel your heartbeat softly pulse
and linger in your smile

There to share each breath you take
each movement of your eye
Mingle with your burning blood
each teardrop as you cry

Taking every step with you
whispering through your voice
So together bound in love
O how we would rejoice

You and I could move the world
if we were joined as one
Hold the stars within our hands
and reach out for the sun

Let me dwell inside of you
my spirit there sustain
Be the guardian of my soul
that I might live again

Topic(s) of this poem: Love

Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 27, 2014
Poem Edited: Sunday, July 27, 2014

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  • Ramesh RaiRamesh Rai (9/24/2014 7:45:00 PM)

    Taking every step with you
    whispering through your voice
    So together bound in love
    O how we would rejoice

    Lovely write. Each stanza is reflection of soul.

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  • Howard McdougalHoward Mcdougal (9/24/2014 12:19:00 PM)

    Very emotional and vivid thanks for sharing.

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  • Eugene LevichEugene Levich (8/21/2014 2:40:00 AM)

    Gentleness, underlying passion, and love. How happy the recipient of this poem must be!

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  • Amitava SurAmitava Sur (8/17/2014 9:02:00 PM)

    Wonderful Valerie you just fill my eyes. Cherish them as sweet memories and dream them ever so nice.

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  • Sandra Feldman (8/16/2014 2:25:00 AM)

    And they say the British are cold?
    This poem cloud burn up a storm, so romantically intense and beautiful it is.

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  • Dee CorpolongoDee Corpolongo (8/10/2014 1:13:00 PM)

    Val, you write such amazing poems that leave me in awe. Beautiful! Another one that is a keeper.

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  • Lyn PaulLyn Paul (8/9/2014 7:35:00 AM)

    So, So beautifully written with such a suited title. THank you Valerie x

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  • Diane HineDiane Hine (7/29/2014 7:57:00 PM)

    You are the master of pathos Val.

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  • Dave Walker (7/29/2014 5:04:00 PM)

    A wonderful wonderful flowing poem, all our souls will one day become one
    with our loved ones.

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  • Tirupathi ChandrupatlaTirupathi Chandrupatla (7/28/2014 6:59:00 PM)

    The poem is inspiring, filling one with renewed energy to move on with fresh energy. Thank you.

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  • Hazel DurhamHazel Durham (7/27/2014 2:42:00 PM)

    An inspired write with so much raw emotions bursting with longing for your beloved, as together you could move the world with so much love and strength woven into your souls!
    I love this moving write full of the beauty of your love!

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