Kelly Kurt

Gold Star - 201,049 Points (1/14/1958 / Cedar Rapids Iowa)

Milky Way (Haiku) - Poem by Kelly Kurt

Spiral galaxy
Plane splashed across the night sky
Gives us perspective

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Haiku

Comments about Milky Way (Haiku) by Kelly Kurt

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/21/2015 1:52:00 PM)

    Superb! Thanks for sharing. .....10 (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (9/21/2015 3:30:00 PM)

    Thanks. The sight always thrills and humbles me.

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  • Liza Sudina (9/21/2015 11:04:00 AM)

    His late fallacy
    if the plane goes down now -
    no way out.

    you inspired me for this haiku. Is that correct? 5-7-5.
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    Kelly Kurt (9/21/2015 12:17:00 PM)

    That is correct. Aren't haiku fun! ?

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/21/2015 10:32:00 AM)

    SUBLIME.................Last line took it to a different level, Well written, Sir. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (9/21/2015 12:16:00 PM)

    Thank you. Haiku should have that effect

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 21, 2015

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