Sorrow Of An Upset Lover Poem by Dr Dillip K Swain

Sorrow Of An Upset Lover

Rating: 3.6


I can't call you a traitor
As you promised me
To live together forever
To divide and share
Our sorrows and joys
Half and half together

You inspired me to
Be a man that you wanted
I altered myself as you needed
Because in my day dream
I dreamt of you
To walk together
To sing together
To dine together
To feel each other's touch
To feel each other's breath
And million such promises
That we made for our love.

Alas, time snatched you from me
Leaving me alone
Making me a forlorn
That I never dreamt of
When we were in the garden of
Of our love
Passing hours and hours
Graced with redolent flowers
Lovely sun shines and whispering air
Perceived like a feeble second
In such a couched love
Where have you gone?
Leaving me alone..!

I am legworking for you in villages
In footpaths, in towns and cities
And I will outlive doing it
Till my legs are able to walk
Till my eyes are able to see
If at all I can see you from distance
To glance at your countenance
If my love has taken a space
On your transformed face

On our possible meeting
In this life, I won't speak to you
Only my silence will whisper
In your sensitive ear
I love you forever.

Copyright@ Poet 16 January,2019

Wednesday, January 16, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aqua Flower 16 January 2019

This write is both Heartbreaking and heartwarming all at the same time. A lover's pain and mourning for the past. A very emotional write Dillip.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 January 2019

A great comment dear poetess Aqua! A million thanks to you! Stay always happy and blessed!

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Valsa George 23 January 2019

In these lines, I hear the suppressed sighs of a deserted lover! After being together in deep love for long, suddenly when one goes away, the other will feel so lonely and miserable! But the good thing here is that the upset lover is not plunged into despair or bitterness! With renewed hope, he is pledged to continue his search for her and once when found out, would whisper the words of love in her ears! A poignant but lovely poem!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 April 2020

A very meticulous review dear madam! I can't find words to express my happiness!

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 January 2019

To feel each other's touch To feel each other's breath....Only my silence will whisper. I love you.- togetherness. love, disappointment, promises. a very powerful poem on love. tony

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Emmanuel Joseph Olumakiss 26 February 2022

Alas, time snatched you from me leaving me alone making me a forlorn i never dreamt of great lines of poetry

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Jayne Davies 26 February 2022

Absolutely beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing x

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Chris Ryan 14 February 2022

A gruesome poem. It shocked me to my core.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 February 2022

I express profuse thanks to you dear Unni ji for visiting and commenting!

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Unnikrishnan E S 10 February 2022

Part 2. " my silence will whisper/ In your sensitive ear /I love you forever." Loved the expression….

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