Michael James Kennedy Findlay

Rookie (20/04/1988 / Gloucester, Gloucestershire)

True Treasure

Poem by Michael James Kennedy Findlay

It lies deep within

Shining like the sun

a radiance in sad times

A true treasure to adore

Your hearts most desire

Held tight, never to let go

If you do, you may never know

This is no item or possession

You cannot feel your hand grasp it

It is a true gift, a golden ticket

A key someone’s to heart

Comments about True Treasure by Michael James Kennedy Findlay

  • Rajaram RamachandranRajaram Ramachandran (11/5/2005 10:07:00 PM)

    It is a kind of feeling in heart and not an item to possess-a true love indeed. Well said in short, but deep it sounds in its meaning.(Report)Reply

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  • ***** ********* (11/5/2005 4:24:00 PM)

    Sharp and pertinent! Nice work.10 from me. All the best Tai(Report)Reply

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  • Michael Findlay (11/5/2005 3:42:00 PM)

    I dont know what to say about this, just sat down playing a game with my family and a friend and it comes to mind. Well thats my comments :)(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 5, 2005