Harsh Joshi

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When Thou Are Upset! ! - Poem by Harsh Joshi

When thou are upset with me,
when my soul burdened be.

Then I find the time,
being the same, As for mine,
Soul that looks never fine.
Joy, that never has pleasure's sign.

Thou! Friend, easily content,
Need no laws, to repent?

I dwelt alone,
in the world of moan
Untill thou came with your spark,
thou, took me out of moaning dark

When thou are upset
the world looks, As I never met,
with it's those happy moments,
which are now far behind
To see them, I with eyes, am still Blind! !

Topic(s) of this poem: friendship

Form: ABC

Comments about When Thou Are Upset! ! by Harsh Joshi

  • Souren Mondal (11/3/2015 4:52:00 AM)

    Well, you had used the archaic language to good effect..

    A nice read...

    Thanks for sharing Harsh :)
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    Harsh Joshi Harsh Joshi (11/7/2015 7:35:00 AM)

    Thank You so much...means a lot.. :)

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  • Kelly Kurt (11/2/2015 12:47:00 PM)

    Nicely written, Harsh. Thanks (Report) Reply

    Harsh Joshi Harsh Joshi (11/7/2015 7:36:00 AM)

    Thank You for your valuable and motivational feedback..

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 2, 2015

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