Who Will Take Care Of Us Poem by Maria Mitea

Who Will Take Care Of Us

Rating: 5.0


now

if we don't love now
fall on our knees, now
if we don't cry out loud, now, if we don't tear apart our clothes right now,
if tears don't crack the stones, now
and hearts don't jump like ping pong balls on fire, now, when we are twisting this strand of hair,
if you don't touch my chin, lightly, like a feather, lightly, now,
now
the gaze, fiery samurais cutting off our eyes with leaves, shattering mustard bellies, - in white webs,
spiders,
in the blink of an eye, releasing air with no shores,
no reins
endless, now
lips, hot steam,
in the blink of an eye, we raise wild rainbows in the clouds,
when? if not now, we caress the lightning with the tongue of longing, in the blink of an eye,
if we don't taste the lilac in between our teeth, now,
when, and how,
and who'll take care of us when we are angry,
tired
and
sad
and
forgotten by the world
left alone
grieving in a naive tremor:

- lovers do not meet at one end, not at the other, but
have always been in each other:

- well, well… but who will take care of us when we are old, alone, and sick
if we don't touch each other, now, like two people

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M. Asim Nehal 21 June 2022

I don't know how to respond. You asked so many important questions and each one reflects your true being. Full *******

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 20 June 2022

A delight to read this wonderful love poem.5 stars.

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Nabakishore Dash 20 June 2022

A very nicely crafted poem of love.

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Richard Wlodarski 19 June 2022

A powefully emotional tribute to love. Very beautiful vivid imagery! Excellent poem, Maria!

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Maria Mitea 19 June 2022

All my gratitude for reading and your appreciation, Richard! IT means a lot to me!

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