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Around The Sun

Rating: 4.9

the nothingness, being, seeing
everything and nothing equally
as if it counts for anything

take an eye, a hand, wrapped
in totality, sparing nothing
gleefully laughing, crying

on an Earth spinning, spun
going around the sun in darkness

then the light appears, something
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Sunday, November 8, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 22 November 2020

take an eye, a hand, wrapped in totality, sparing nothing gleefully laughing, crying very good poem. tony

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 17 November 2020

Your poem is beautifully written and captivating. It's in my list.

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Dawn Small 13 November 2020

A wonderful poem. Thank you.

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 November 2020

the nothingness- something! from the nothingness to something- there is hidden the mystery of life!

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An interesting poem woven by a discerning mind

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 April 2021

Absolutely a brilliant poem! Liked it so much..5 atars

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Susan Williams 12 January 2021

seeing everything and nothing equally as if it counts for anything---love the word play going on in this too---adds depth

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Susan Williams 12 January 2021

I love word play of spinning-spun

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Anjandev Roy 31 December 2020

Brilliant piece....

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Robert Murray Smith 01 January 2021

Great comment.

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