Kelly Kurt

Gold Star - 206,663 Points (1/14/1958 / Cedar Rapids Iowa)

Ceaseless Impermanence (Limerick) - Poem by Kelly Kurt

Nothing has lasted forever, yet
Tho some may ask; "What about my debt? "
All kidding set aside
It is too hard to hide
The condition may never be met

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Limerick

Comments about Ceaseless Impermanence (Limerick) by Kelly Kurt

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (1/14/2016 10:15:00 PM)

    You are true. Nothing has lasted forever. Very interesting and wise sharing done and this is nice Limerick.10 (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (1/15/2016 1:18:00 PM)

    An oxymoronic title giving humor to a deep subject. Nothing can last forever because by definition, forever does not have an ending point

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  • (1/9/2016 2:16:00 AM)

    Great one! But even debt cannot last forever, because we must die sometime. I believe death may be permanent in some cases! Ha Ha Ha Ha! Fortunately it wasn't in my case! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (1/9/2016 4:19:00 PM)

    Debt can be inherited but is not permanent. the only thing that is permanent is impermanence

  • Wes Vogler (1/8/2016 7:27:00 PM)

    Second line a little ragged but a limerick intact it is. Time to inject some humour in the name of entertainment. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (1/9/2016 4:21:00 PM)

    I thought that the first line was a little rough. I am still working on it

  • Souren Mondal (1/8/2016 7:49:00 AM)

    Some debts are really hard to pay.. A very well crafted poem Kelly.. Thank you for sharing.. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (1/8/2016 10:22:00 AM)

    True, tho my intent was more about nothing being permanent and that being a permanent condition: -)

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (1/8/2016 12:52:00 AM)

    Very true...Nothing lasts but debts, those who have habit of asking will never be free from debts.....Lovely..10+++ (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (1/8/2016 2:04:00 AM)

    I think I liked the title at least as much as the poem. Oxymoronic truth. : -)

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 8, 2016

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