Thursday, July 30, 2009


Rating: 4.8
Every time I see you
A fire in me burns alive
Right in the depths of my soul
And the hills of wax melt away.

Whenever I think of you
My heart pants for you
And my soul thirsts for you,
It makes me wish God will bless
Me with you and never bless me again.

Because of a certain aura of love
Borne by your winsome eyes,
Bringing me love as sweet as nectar
And as inevitable as the fate of the soul of Hector

So my spirit is tortured
And now I'm robbed of my sleep
With my boundless thoughts
In the quietness of the sun's absence
Cloaked by you and your seemingly shallow cares.

I believe our souls are made of a sole material
Because our souls seem united for some purpose
And I hope there will be time to fathom why
And hold communion.
Making me the favored possessor of your love
Before the wrinkles of time hiding behind
Our youth crawls up our faces.
Kobik William
Luke Johnson 05 January 2010
'Making me the favored possessor of your love Before the wrinkles of time hiding behind Our youth crawls up our faces.' I love this imagery. The concept that communion of love will distill this beautifully written yet sad occurrence is phenomenal.
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dr veenaa rai 13 August 2009
hopes in love keep the fire alive...well written.
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Henry Brown 03 August 2009
It must be really wonderful to be loved as much as the passion in this poem brings out. Well penned! ! ! !
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Chitra - 03 August 2009
a deep poem about the marvelous feeling of love
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 August 2009
A common thing to share, that is love.Beautiful piece Kobik!
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Anjali Sinha 02 August 2009
wow a very good write theres a certain aura about your poem lovely poem keep sharing this lovely writes
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Bob Blackwell 01 August 2009
You are a wonderful poet, and you reach deep down to drag out the emotion of your tale of love.
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Melissia Ann Senter 01 August 2009
A very deep and emotional write my friend wonderfully written Thanks for sharing Melissia Ann
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Lindo Mvelase 01 August 2009
Mm what a murvelous piece, an owesome expression of a deep feeling of love, i like it. i think in your 1st line maybe you wanted to say 'everytime' instead of 'everything'.
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M.j. Daniels 01 August 2009
it's very nice. can you read one of my poems called listen i think you'll like it
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