Archie Avidity

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Darkness Embraced Me - Poem by Archie Avidity

Rallying deep into a forest,
As the time grew I met a forrest,

The darkness kept covering me as the conversation continued,
The forrest asked me to return as the darkness sinewed,

I left and kept going through,
The darkness covered me as I tried to flew,

I gazed at the sky, found the moon to shine,
As I looked around in vain, the darkness started to fine.

Yet the paths fenced off and I found myself shattered,
I became fugitive as I found myself battered,

Darkness embraced me,
Now, I yearn to flee.

Topic(s) of this poem: darkness, depression

Form: Couplet


Comments about Darkness Embraced Me by Archie Avidity

  • Edward Kofi Louis (11/29/2015 10:27:00 AM)


    'I yearn to flee '! Watching my steps in what i do. Nice work. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 29, 2015



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