anushmadhu P.Bharathi

Flame - Poem by anushmadhu P.Bharathi

Cast light in you to drive
Darkness away from me;
Harnessed with my palms
As the flame flickered,
It tuned my thought,
Now the darkness
Surrounds you,
And I am the flame.

(In Tamil- Mazhaippen-Kavigar.Phazhani Bharathi)

Comments about Flame by anushmadhu P.Bharathi

  • Dennis Go (1/13/2010 1:10:00 AM)

    This is a good one. Nice job containing the essence in a short verse. (Report) Reply

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  • (1/7/2010 11:49:00 PM)

    Dude I love fire. Its always been a great paradox that can destroy everything but keeps you alive if you can control it. like it mane. (Report) Reply

  • (12/30/2009 3:19:00 AM)

    You express yourself through only a limited amount of words, yet they encompass such great meaning. It as if each word was carefully chosen for each line to make a truly astounding poem. (Report) Reply

  • (12/30/2009 2:32:00 AM)

    really great you have a way with words! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (12/27/2009 11:30:00 PM)

    very nice thoughts make this beautiful poem an outstanding wishes......ritty (Report) Reply

  • (12/22/2009 3:42:00 PM)

    I like the way you write :))

    Bahut badhiya! !
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  • Myrtle Thomas (12/18/2009 6:36:00 PM)

    I found this to be a darling poem.Very well thought out.Great Job! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 16, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 30, 2011

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