I And We Game
Rating: ★5.0
Humans are social beings
Livin' life in unison profound.
Playing their part in groups As father, son, and husband.
Caring every other's needs
Putting self aside, others satisfied.
But, deep down lies
Innocent I, who wants to be identified.
Wailing like a child, in needs
Raising head at least to be crowned.
A foresighted insight leads
And a wise decision nurture good breed.
There will always be an I seeds
And there will also be a we need,
It's me who have to make choices
Depending on weightage of each stand.
AD17022021
Livin' life in unison profound.
Playing their part in groups As father, son, and husband.
Caring every other's needs
Putting self aside, others satisfied.
But, deep down lies
Innocent I, who wants to be identified.
Wailing like a child, in needs
Raising head at least to be crowned.
A foresighted insight leads
And a wise decision nurture good breed.
There will always be an I seeds
And there will also be a we need,
It's me who have to make choices
Depending on weightage of each stand.
AD17022021
Wednesday, February 17, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: wisdom,family life,life,lessons of life,wish
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Often we struggle for I-we bussiness. At times we have to choose I, other times it's we that rules. Both are important. Only we need to make wise choices. Photo courtesy pinterest.
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
COMMENTS
Sharad Bhatia
19 February 2021
Shandar.. A Magnificent poem
0
0
Reply
Rose Marie Juan-austin
19 February 2021
A wonderful poem imbued with wisdom and insight. Great message and thoughts to ponder about.
0
0
Reply
Evelyn Judy Buehler
18 February 2021
There is wisdom and beauty in the words of this verse-it seems that all of life is a balance of the two.
0
0
Reply
Kostas Lagos
18 February 2021
I wish there were more than five stars to rate this poem. I would need all the night sky!
0
0
Reply
Sylvia Frances Chan
18 February 2021
The I and We games are all the same, only the decision at the right moment will make the great difference. Yes, Varsha, we ought to make wise choices at the right moment.5 Stars!
0
0
Reply
Indira Renganathan
18 February 2021
A good analysis on I...I go with poet Deluke Muwanigwa's comment...5*****
0
0
Reply
Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
17 February 2021
Marvellous thoughts. If there is a 10 star I could have give it! . Man is a social being, needs to give care to everyone around. But the self is ore iportant in the modern society. If there is any who forgets the self he/she has to pay for it in the end
1
0
Reply
Deluke Muwanigwa
17 February 2021
Good poem Varsha. Even as we are social animals there is still a solitude in each of us. That's why living with others is a compromise.
0
0
Reply
Valentine's Day
Love Poems
Baby Poems
Death Poems
Sad Poems
Birthday Poems
Wedding Poems
Nature Poems
Sorry Poems
Hero Poems
Poetry E-Books
Christmas Poems
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
3/5/2021 4:40:54 PM # 1.0.0.510
