Igwe Kalu

Iii. The Place Of My Love, You

I'll find you by the moon
And same time, by the sun
-Betwixt you are, mild and bright
...The fairest and finest.

Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 30, 2007
Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 19, 2012

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Comments about Iii. The Place Of My Love, You by Igwe Kalu

  • Konjit Berhane (8/13/2007 1:02:00 PM)

    nice poem that sounds Simple yet deep and expressive

    keepup the good work..

    koni

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  • Walt Martin (7/9/2007 7:53:00 AM)

    My initial thought, aside from recognizing the quality of your poem, was that 'Gee, I wish that were expanded'. ... but then, you'd have to chop away, and whittle down. ... an adoring gem amongst browned pebbles on the beach, small, but complete as can be.

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  • Joscephine Gomez (7/6/2007 5:53:00 AM)

    The sun and the moon: what better imagery to express your loved one's beauty? I feel, however, that there could be a better title. What about 'You, between the sun and the moon'

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  • Delilah Miller (7/2/2007 1:13:00 PM)

    Guess that would make it a shining star: ] Lovely poem, just as fair and mild as the subject of the poem.

    X's and O's

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