s./j. goldner

Rookie (March 2nd,1984 / USA)

Miss Saturday Lazy - Poem by s./j. goldner

beatles coffee drinking
whiskey and rye
bread
where is my blackbird when
plenty of sparrows are in
the yard
fenced-in and can't escape;
all your life
you were
only
waiting for
what moment to arise?


Comments about Miss Saturday Lazy by s./j. goldner

  • Brian Dorn (11/11/2007 12:57:00 PM)


    Sus, 'Blackbird' is one of my all-time favorite Beatles' songs. I like your take on it... nicely done, as always! (Report) Reply

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  • (2/3/2007 12:28:00 PM)


    What a thing to evaluate, then, this question many continue to elucidate. Indeed, I have arguments constantly with loved ones on this very subject, though never over coffee. :)
    My Best,
    Joy
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  • (8/16/2006 2:47:00 PM)


    There always does seem something undefined that we can wish for. Thank you for filling some of your moments with this fine poem. (Report) Reply

  • (5/24/2006 5:19:00 PM)


    Ah, now there is a profound question, I could ramble for along time about this subject
    so, for now, I will just say thankyou for making the connection
    Love Duncan X
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 2, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 10, 2006


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