Kelly Kurt

Gold Star - 210,886 Points (1/14/1958 / Cedar Rapids Iowa)

Tanka (Tanka) - Poem by Kelly Kurt

Artfully crafted
First eliciting the scene
Subtle shift midway
Allows the reader to feel
Subjectively exploring

Topic(s) of this poem: life, poetry

Form: Tanka

Comments about Tanka (Tanka) by Kelly Kurt

  • David Wood (9/16/2015 1:35:00 PM)

    Tanka on tanka well crafted. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (9/16/2015 7:15:00 PM)

    Thanks, David. It was difficult to try to elicit any emotion or diversity of subjective thought for the reader in this particular Tanka but perhaps it introduced the form to others who may appreciate its possibilities.

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/16/2015 12:56:00 PM)

    Telling and terse...........Loved it. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (9/16/2015 7:12:00 PM)

    Thank you, Mohammed. The brevity of this form and haiku, force the writer to impart a lot, tersely

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/16/2015 12:34:00 PM)

    Well expressed on Tanka as a Tanka. Wisely drafted. Thanks for sharing. .....10 (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (9/16/2015 7:10:00 PM)

    Thank you. It is quickly becoming a favorite form to work with

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 16, 2015

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