Friday, February 27, 2009


Rating: 2.7
Was deeper then before
There was
More and more
No way for the blood…
To stop
Now it is…
Upon the floor
I can barely breathe
I feel set free
At ease
The blood…
Drips of my wrist
On to the floor
More and more
If I die tonight
No one will care
No one
Will even cry
I won’t be missed
All I will be is a…
Far off memory
In the back of your mind
I will never be thought of
No one cares about me
I don’t matter
I am going to…
Cut deeper
I am going to…
Broken Hearts
Brenna Franklin 13 January 2016
Brilliantly written, but it just goes downhill. You should encourage people to not kill themselves, it feels like you are egging them on. I do not mean to be rude but I like to express my feelings on certain things.
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Sierra Mick 17 April 2012
OMG! ! ! ! OMG! ! ! ! Bravo! ! ! ! I love your poem. they are so what i think. All your poem are exactly what i think. Omg i cant explain how much these poem mean to me
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