Kelly Kurt

Gold Star - 194,042 Points (1/14/1958 / Cedar Rapids Iowa)

Warden Of Eden (Limerick) - Poem by Kelly Kurt

You'd think he'd have known it was coming
Was making all things that mind numbing?
It didn't take too long
Til he said they were wrong
And cursed all with eternal drumming

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Limerick

Comments about Warden Of Eden (Limerick) by Kelly Kurt

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (2/3/2016 11:18:00 AM)

    Verily, we were tested and are tested and will be tested (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (2/3/2016 1:53:00 PM)

    Having been given a failing mark before the exam started

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/28/2016 1:53:00 PM)

    The works of life. Nice work. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (1/28/2016 4:08:00 PM)

    All of my works are about life. It is a universal subject

  • Dimitrios Galanis (1/25/2016 3:13:00 PM)

    It sounds beatiful but I can not catch what is meant.It is like the jokes.You laugh before understanding what is it about.I'll wait for more experts to comment it. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (1/25/2016 6:59:00 PM)

    A perfect, all knowing creator failed to see that his creations were not perfect and punished them (and all humans since) for his shortcomings. Nice guy, right. : -)

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 25, 2016

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