Seema Chowdhury

A Field Of Battle In My Way - Poem by Seema Chowdhury

A battle field in my way
Is standing at the start of the day
Where everyday challenges are found
In every layer of life's ground
I want to play and win them all
Before in my life curtains fall
For each of these challenges of life
Teaches me how to boldly survive

I want to acquire knowledge of life
Where I'll learn to smoothly drive
The car of my success to bring me joy
And see how each minute of it I enjoy
For life is too short to waste my friend
Where ever new road has crack or bend
And unless I find the secret code of fain
I cannot win in the battle field of pain.

Topic(s) of this poem: pain

Comments about A Field Of Battle In My Way by Seema Chowdhury

  • (8/31/2008 12:43:00 AM)

    The life is full of miseries and pain, and Man tries to overcome them with His meager power, when He overcomes them, then again a new flock of troubles He get to be overcome, each day He get new challenges; then by and by His strength weaken and departs from this world leaving behind.

    Muhammad Shanazar
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  • (5/17/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    Opposition and challenges in life are meant to be overcome. This poem is all about the importance of self confidence and positive out look. Very good message, seema! Very good composition too…a 10. (Report) Reply

  • (4/25/2008 3:55:00 AM)

    i cannot win the battle of pain.......yes u cannot for i myself cant the gud work! (Report) Reply

  • (4/22/2008 7:32:00 AM)

    'I want to play and win them all' the witty version … it is beautiful … (Report) Reply

  • (4/21/2008 11:48:00 PM)

    In life's field of battle you Seema shall win every time! Great write & insight! ! *10*! !
    Best regards, Friend Thad
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  • (4/21/2008 10:34:00 PM)

    I feel that the sentiment in the poem concerns us all...reminds me or Frost famous lines...
    The wood are lovely dark and deep
    But I have promises to keep
    Miles to go before I sleep
    Miles to go before I sleep....
    your expression is marvellous...every day comes like a challenge... and we have to live to this challenge...
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  • Ershad Mazumder (4/17/2008 10:31:00 PM)

    Life is like that.This poem gives an impression that the poetess Seema is struggling with her everyday life.She wants to win it.A poet is always victorious.A poet is a dreamer. She or h makes people dreaming.
    Style and composition is good.
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  • (4/16/2008 9:07:00 PM)

    Your courage is expressed very well in these words, each day we all strive to battle whatever life may bring us. All we can do is take one day at a time. May peace and joy fill your heart each and everyday.

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  • (4/16/2008 5:31:00 PM)

    WOW. I'M IN AWE.
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  • (4/16/2008 1:56:00 PM)

    Hmmm. very courageous attitude. Poem has some signs of incessant fire that kindles the hope to emerge as victorious. (Report) Reply

  • (4/16/2008 1:57:00 AM)

    Secret code - 'Determination to succeed'! (Report) Reply

  • rajagopal haran (4/16/2008 1:51:00 AM)

    wish you all the best...enjoyed reading... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 14, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, August 31, 2014

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