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Agony My Companion

The dazzling bright light
Knocks my window blinds
To peep in and make it bright
Pulling the blanket of darkness.

Caught in marshy depression
Allergic to every pleasure commission
Confining me to deep dongeon
Where light fails to make penetration.

World around fails to see my rolling tear
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Agony My Companion
Friday, August 21, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life,pain
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Evelyn Judy Buehler 13 November 2020

Your poem vividly describes the despair of depression-the inner darkness in a world of dazzling light, and the need to break free of its grip. The picture complements the poem very well also.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 October 2020

Behind the veil! ! Behind the mask! Pulling down the blanket of darkness! ! ! Loneliness, Where is the light? ! Tears, Fears, Depression; How i desire to be myself. * Nice piece of work. * ?? Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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