Luo Zhihai

Gold Star - 264,384 Points (In 1954 December / Haifeng / Shanwei / Guangdong / China)

Appreciated

Poem by Luo Zhihai

欣赏

杜鹃啼破春宵月
杨柳拂平夏水波
醉卧松山听鹤唳
闲栖竹苑品莺 歌


Appreciated

Cuckoos cried to break the moon in the spring evening
Willows touched flat the waves of the summer water
I lied in the pine mountain to listen to cry of the cranes drunkenly
I enjoyed the warbler song in the bamboo garden leisurely

3/29/2020格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9773首对联体诗
The 9,773th Two Pairs of Couplets

后记:
对联体诗遵循《对联体诗律则(草稿)》写作,每一句字数由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(绝句), 是一种格律体新诗。目前国内有几十位诗人参与创作。

Topic(s) of this poem: evening, lie, moon, mountain, pine, song, spring


Comments about Appreciated by Luo Zhihai

  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (3/30/2020 2:01:00 AM)

    Cuckoos cried to break the moon in the spring evening. The imagery is brilliantly expressed in wonderful thought.(Report)Reply

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  • Douglas Scotney (3/29/2020 9:05:00 PM)

    I like the idea of a broken moon. 'lied' is wrong - should be 'lay'(Report)Reply

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