karen maccallum

As The Sun Sets - Poem by karen maccallum

As the sun sets

As the sun sets
the gentle white
the moon comes out
and im all
a lone
in a shadowly
dusky, creepy
room with no
food nor water
i start to think
of all the fun time
i had
now all my
thoughts are
and now they
are on you...

Comments about As The Sun Sets by karen maccallum

  • (4/5/2009 1:10:00 AM)

    its a loneliness that makes a person think in this way..
    so lovely sadly penned..
    hazem al..
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  • (4/5/2009 12:02:00 AM)

    Thoughts.. trail off.. into something we can let go of... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 4, 2009

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