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Aspire

Rating: 4.6

Life is a challenge
Turning back is not possible
Barging is the only alternative.

Daily the same routine
I repeat now and then
As a machine program.

Amidst this journey
I forgot who I am

Serving the holy purpose.
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Aspire
Tuesday, August 11, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: challenges,desire,fight,lifespan
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem was written for #LLA MICROPOETRY CONTEST 80 for the prompt #WATER. Often challenges are not accepted but when we pass through it we become a new creature more better and sound.
Photo by Jukan Tateisi on unsplash.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 01 July 2021

Really a thought provoking and motivation piece of poetry written with conviction...

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Lasaad Tayeb 26 June 2021

I enjoyed reading this incredible poem, indeed life is mystical and challenging. Appreciate it if you can take a look to my page, your feedback is most welcomed. Blessings

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 May 2021

Life is a challenge Turning back is not possible Barging is the only alternative....truthfully expressed!

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Bharati Nayak 08 February 2021

A great poem with positive power----Whether we like it or not, we have to face challenges in life.If we see these challenges as benchmark to our progress, we can tackle them more easily.

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Life is a challenge. True. Aspire for manifestation, not for time pass.Great. Beautiful

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 January 2021

Liked the powerful opening lines and how the Poetess ended this marvelous poem. Beautifully conveyed.

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Varsha M 11 January 2021

Thank-you Rose. These words are really encouraging.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 January 2021

A wonderful and insightful poem that propels one to reach his own star. Very inspiring.

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Varsha M 11 January 2021

Yes Rose i wanted prople to aspire and reach to your positions.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 January 2021

Amidst this journey I forget who I am while serving the holy purpose... great! Rain, your have chosen a wonderful journey of life that a few people choose!

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Varsha M 11 January 2021

Thank-you sir for you wonderful encouraging words.

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Robert Murray Smith 08 January 2021

Lfe is where we always move along. Fine write.

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Varsha M 11 January 2021

Yes sir. We need to move on.

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Challenges in life make one special.It is a thought provoking and inspiring poem very nicely penned.

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