Rachel Hill

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Bitterness - Poem by Rachel Hill

BITTERNESS....

Negative emotion
Is what I feel for you
Resentment, anger and hatred
Is a feeling I could not let go...
So many times you've crossed me
Into something that I should not let you do
Giving satisfaction to the thought
'I will never let you go'

Now has come the time
I must ended for us two
Enough is enough
To the pain and hurts
You inflicted so!
Hard to let you go
But for my sanity I must do
So that I can move on
To a life I am destined to do so.....

Goodbye my friend
I'm crying with pain for you
Hard to imagine that I am parting from you
If the only way forward is for me to loose you
I will do anything to say
Goodbye and adios to you! ! ! !

Composed by Rachel Hill

Topic(s) of this poem: hatred


Comments about Bitterness by Rachel Hill

  • Kelly Kurt (10/4/2015 6:07:00 PM)


    A very well written, emotionally charged poem. Thanks, Rachel (Report) Reply

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  • Miraj Raha (9/16/2015 11:33:00 AM)


    heartfelt poem that screams from the soul. (Report) Reply

    Rachel Hill Rachel Hill (9/16/2015 11:43:00 AM)

    Thank you for your comment...truly appreciated.

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 16, 2015



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