Esra Sloblock

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* Cardiac Stormtrooper - Poem by Esra Sloblock

I could smell it.
The heavy, ominously sweet scent
Of the impending deluge
Of passion.
Earth shattering rumbles
Of thunderous emotion.
Punctuated by
Unstoppable fiery streaks
Of desire.
Then it came.
The relentless
Solid, steady downpour
Of knowing.
Really knowing.


Comments about * Cardiac Stormtrooper by Esra Sloblock

  • (8/31/2008 2:32:00 PM)

    You only know what its worth is when it has gone completely from your life.
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  • (8/10/2008 10:06:00 AM)

    Passion's portrait..... The title say's it all! (Report)Reply

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  • (5/22/2008 12:52:00 AM)

    Yes, knowing it is. To know in oneself what the other gender (may) feel(s) ! (Report)Reply

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  • (4/28/2008 2:04:00 PM)

    love the last 4 lines (Report)Reply

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  • Melvina Germain (8/25/2007 12:44:00 PM)

    An erotic storm of fire thunderously crashing down, ahh beautiful. Yes I would love to hear you recite this however I believe I did a great job of reciting it as well. Wonderfu poem Esra.--Melvina-- (Report)Reply

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  • (7/5/2007 4:44:00 PM)

    Definitely a ton here. What I'd give to hear you recite this with that wonderful way you express things and that voice that commands you to listen. The poem is brilliant. If I hang around long enough I might learn something. Top marks and thanks for sharing it.
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  • (7/2/2007 3:52:00 AM)

    Spare language - but such an impact! (Report)Reply

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  • (6/30/2007 3:18:00 AM)

    Tara's right you are good. This is bloody good. You use few words and aim each with such skill that it hits its mark with Robin Hood accuracy. Explosive, passionate penning! A magical read. love, Allie xxxx (Report)Reply

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  • (6/29/2007 12:43:00 PM)

    There is nothing like a wet Northern girl to get the heart going...10 (Report)Reply

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  • (6/29/2007 11:35:00 AM)

    Always leave your brolly at home sweetheart. Hell, you're good. t xxxxx (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 29, 2007

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 17, 2011
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