Kelly Kurt

Gold Star - 210,665 Points (1/14/1958 / Cedar Rapids Iowa)

Disapproval (Limerick) - Poem by Kelly Kurt

A fuzzy faced llama from Peru
Did just what it’s expected to do
I invaded its space
And it spit in my face
Which is now fully covered in goo

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Limerick

Comments about Disapproval (Limerick) by Kelly Kurt

  • Wes Vogler (11/14/2015 10:54:00 PM)

    A quick fix on that awkward first line could be.. A fuzzy-faced Llama (Peru?)
    2nd line, of course, the beat is on 'what' you can sing it
    huzzah You are almost ready for the challenge.
    We agree on the same joke and each make up a limerick a 9
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    Kelly Kurt (11/14/2015 11:04:00 PM)

    You bring my mind joy, Wes. Thanks

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  • Ayman Parray (11/8/2015 3:07:00 PM)

    Made me laugh out loud and think that 'Did you ride it too'. I mean at least you could ride the animal after going thru so much trouble. Great limerick buddy, very funny, really enjoyed it. Thank you. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/8/2015 3:42:00 PM)

    It would take a large llama to carry me.: -) Thanks, Ayman

  • Sanjukta Nag (11/8/2015 3:32:00 AM)

    Oh no! ! ! I can envision it: D Very nice sir. laughing out loud. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/8/2015 3:39:00 PM)

    I have seen many videos showing this. Thanks

  • (11/8/2015 1:52:00 AM)

    he could have bit off your nose, very good limerick
    thanks Kely-10
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    Kelly Kurt (11/8/2015 2:04:00 AM)

    I should have found a picture.: -)

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/7/2015 6:47:00 PM)

    Very fun making amazing Limerick shared in expressive way. This is fantastic definitely.10 (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/7/2015 7:07:00 PM)

    Thanks, Kumarmani. I don't know where this one came from.: -)

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 7, 2015

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