M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,261 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Drained - Rubaiyat - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

I feel I am waiting like oranges
watching others going through crush machine
Just left with skin no juicy life
are we not following the same pattern!

Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle

Form: Limerick


Comments about Drained - Rubaiyat by M. Asim Nehal

  • (11/16/2015 8:51:00 AM)


    Philosophical writing in rubaiyat format....Awesome man (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/16/2015 9:17:00 AM)

    THANK U SO MUCH DARREN....

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  • (8/29/2015 1:26:00 AM)


    And we all are in the same boat..........liked this Rubaiyat.....10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 28, 2015



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