anushmadhu P.Bharathi


' Drenched Woman' - Poem by anushmadhu P.Bharathi

My poetry is
Your bathing space;
Words are showering
On your naked body,
And rolls down at
The surface of your skin,
And reaches at the bottom of
Your golden foot;
When you moved away,
The space is filled with meaning;
The pleasant
Moment of bathing is
Always remembered
By a sticking letter or word
In the surface of your skin
Even after drying up the wetness.


Comments about ' Drenched Woman' by anushmadhu P.Bharathi

  • Leonard Dabydeen (3/16/2010 12:00:00 PM)

    Very, very romantic, Anush.The personification is of rich imagery as if you're romancing the soul. Enjoy the read.
    Thanks for sharing.
    Blessings.
    Leonard
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  • (2/9/2010 3:50:00 AM)

    This poem is well written, but not for everyone to read. This should only be read from a man to his wife, for free passion is not pure. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/26/2010 3:21:00 AM)

    that is spontaneous and definitely some one would like it. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/25/2010 8:00:00 PM)

    dripping with passion! (Report)Reply

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  • (1/24/2010 9:23:00 AM)

    Wow, so passionate through it's words. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/23/2010 2:40:00 PM)

    so beautiful, I loved it! (Report)Reply

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  • Chris Mackie (1/22/2010 1:16:00 PM)

    Outstanding! , very human... I vote you 9.
    Best always, Chris.
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  • (1/22/2010 7:01:00 AM)

    My poetry is
    Your bathing space;

    I love that sentence.
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  • Adam Reed (1/22/2010 6:35:00 AM)

    it takes some passion to write like that. bravo! (Report)Reply

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  • (1/20/2010 3:35:00 AM)

    Brilliant

    Naked

    Romantic


    Can I copy your poem to my blog in makeyourpoem.blogspot.com Mr.Bharathi?
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  • (1/20/2010 1:55:00 AM)

    The pleasures of warm water pouring over our bodies after a long hard day, just like the pleasure of soft, caressing words from a lover.
    Liked it! Ruthie
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  • (1/19/2010 9:34:00 PM)

    Excellent concept.10 for just that (Report)Reply

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  • Ershad Mazumder (1/19/2010 9:07:00 PM)

    Idea is simply excellant. Dear Anus compose your soul not body. Do not care for others criticism. Keep your soul happy, not critics. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/19/2010 6:05:00 AM)

    Well, if I ever write a poem as clever and wonderful as that I will be ready to die. Life complete and ready to go! (Report)Reply

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  • (1/16/2010 7:40:00 AM)

    HI.Great imagination.Nice and deep figures of speech..
    A good piece.
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  • (1/15/2010 7:31:00 PM)

    Moment of bathing is
    Always remembered
    By a sticking letter or word
    In the surface of your skin
    Even after drying up the wetness.

    Great way of comparing a poetry and a woman thru' bathing.

    Keep writing.
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  • (1/14/2010 5:25:00 PM)

    wow very romantic
    you almost blow my mind
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  • (1/14/2010 2:35:00 PM)

    An interesting concept (Report)Reply

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  • (1/13/2010 10:32:00 PM)

    I see beauty here as a reward. However, the most important thing is not the reward but the experience and learnings you get in striving for something. Nice poem enjoyed it too (Report)Reply

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  • (1/13/2010 8:49:00 AM)

    very immaginative and a creaive poem.the essence of a woman is not only her beauty, but the many facets of her inner self which shines through, and makes the poet write in ecstacy.lovely poem anush, and i enjoyedthis poem
    ritty
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 13, 2010



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