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Drunk Again...

Rating: 4.5

I heard the tyres shriek,
As you pulled in,
I heard the hooter beep,
As you hit the door,
Should I go?
Should I stay?
I lie silently,
Listening,
But don't hear a thing,
I go down,

Shocked by what I see,
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Sandra Fowler 24 February 2008

Excellent write, Sarah Your powerful last line tells me that you have wisdom far beyond your years. Take care. As always, Sandra

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Craig Anderson 05 February 2008

A piece full of anger, confusion and fear. The demons of drinking to excess. Very Good. Craig.

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Bonnie Collins 04 February 2008

conveys alot of anxiety that comes with drinking... Very well potrayed......Bonine Collins

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