RieKairu Calo

Rookie - 0 Points (march 8,1995 / Philippines)

I As The Planet And You As The Sun - Poem by RieKairu Calo

In the beginning of my world
you're already there,
giving the right guide and enough life
you never leave me and watch me as I go
you never leave me to the darkness

You always search for your strength
for you to hold my hands for a long time
and walk together with me
while I walk, you lightens my way
and give life from inside

I as the planet,
will be here to let your hands hold mine
you as the sun,
will be here to guide me and lead the way
I imagined the life without you
I will lose my direction,
I will lose my light,
I will lose myself
and you as the sun gives important to me
and I as the planet,
roles,
to be the one to love you so deep, forever
til the last star dies

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  • (12/11/2009 8:45:00 AM)


    well i don't have a man, , , , only my father....well I just thought this idea and I can dedicate this one to all the people who's always been there for me (Report) Reply

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  • (12/11/2009 6:01:00 AM)


    what a gifed poem, who is that man? can you say? hidden or open? as you wish. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 11, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, December 13, 2009


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