Triauna Hall

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I Hate That I Hate - Poem by Triauna Hall

I hate the way you treat me
I hate that everything is how you want it to be
I hate all your lies and silly games
I hate how you make them all the same
I hate that I feel this way
I hate that I can't take the pain away
I hate that I'm your back bone
I hate being in the same zone
I hate the way you make me feel
I hate the pain won't heal
I hate that you are too blind to see
I hate that I want to leave
I hate not wanting to be around
I hate your mouth that produces bad sounds
I hate a lot of other things too
But I hate that you make me hate you


Comments about I Hate That I Hate by Triauna Hall

  • Naomi Waters (10/24/2017 3:33:00 PM)


    I am glad I helped, I am still in high school and have been writing poems for about 3 years. I have written about 200 poems and haven't yet published them all. (Report) Reply

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  • Naomi Waters (10/4/2017 4:56:00 PM)


    change I hate the pain wont heal to I hate the pain that cant heal or I hate the pain I wont let heal. Not trying to be a critic I love it im not a happy person to be honest I hate everything happy. I am going to read more of your work (Report) Reply

    Triauna Hall (10/5/2017 8:10:00 AM)

    Lol, thanks for the advice. I know I have to edit alot of these. I wrote most of them in grade school...lol I am college student now so I gotta update them. Thanks! I'm glad you like it!

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 23, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, February 24, 2012


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