Adam McKim

Rookie - 222 Points (11/12/1984)

If She Be The One - Poem by Adam McKim

I pray to thee Lord
If she be the one,
Then all I ask
Is let it be done.

I pray to thee Lord
If this be our fate,
Then guide me to her
Please don't make me wait

I pray to thee Lord
My one God above,
Show me what it's like
To have true love.

I pray to thee Lord
Please do not shun,
Let love take a chance
If she be the one.


Comments about If She Be The One by Adam McKim

  • Tiana Webb (8/29/2012 7:16:00 PM)


    Another amazing poem. Lately I've needed something like this, somethign hopeful, to remind me that there really is some good to life. It's beautiful. (Report) Reply

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  • Valerie Dohren (8/26/2012 2:12:00 PM)


    Very simple but sweet and heartfelt write. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (8/22/2012 12:22:00 PM)


    Nice shape...but i am not so good to talk and comment about poetry structure and style...just amateur one but your poem is easy digest and nice mind bound poem! i just want to talk about the meaning, yes i love the way you show the hopefulness, you bring it with faith with feeling chained perfectly..that's a great way to move...may your words will be listened and be patience of the answer, it maybe takes time but it left you happiest at the end_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Ellias Anderson Jr. (8/20/2012 6:42:00 AM)


    A fragrant poem with nice and good aspects. Lovely one! I like the poems with professional structures, I like to write with structure too, but some of my works really wouldn't be like yours. You are talented man, nice Poem!
    Keep the good work up
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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 20, 2012



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