Jez C Brul

If You Walk Away - Poem by Jez C Brul

If you walk away
Don't turn your head back,
You may not find me,
For I will quickly run to you,
Till my shadow meets yours,
And your shadow meets mine.

Topic(s) of this poem: friendship

Form: Free Verse

Comments about If You Walk Away by Jez C Brul

  • Dr Dillip K Swain (2/11/2019 11:26:00 PM)

    This is short and a sweet poem with lovely expression! Many congratulations for this cute poem being chosen as Poem of the Day! (Report) Reply

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  • Jez Brul (2/11/2019 10:59:00 PM)

    I would like to take this opportunity to give thanks to my fellow PH members who take time to send warmest congratulations and heart-warming feedbacks...You are all an inspiration. To Poem Hunter admin, thank you so much from the bottom of my heart for the selection of this humble poem as Member Poem of the Day..I love you all..❤❤❤ (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (2/11/2019 9:42:00 PM)

    Lovely poem.. seeking to unite.. come what may. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (2/11/2019 9:31:00 PM)

    No walking away.... a sweet poem.
    The thought of the two shadows meeting, instead of the bodies explicitly, is the beauty of the poem.
    Heartiest congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!
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  • Rose Marie Juan-austin (2/11/2019 9:24:00 PM)

    Brilliant six lines depicting true and enduring friendship.
    A heartwarming and sweet write.
    Cleverly written.10++++and on to my Poem List.
    Congratulations, Jez.
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    Jez Brul (2/11/2019 11:01:00 PM)

    Thank you so much ate are a inspiration to us...Best wishes.

  • (2/11/2019 4:50:00 PM)

    beautifully penned dear Jez! congrats for being selected as POD (Report) Reply

    Jez Brul (2/11/2019 7:21:00 PM)

    Thanks dear Susheela...Stay as sweet as you are.❤️💖💘

  • Savita Tyagi (2/11/2019 4:41:00 PM)

    Congratulations for a beautiful poem, so strong in faith and love of friendship. (Report) Reply

    Jez Brul (2/11/2019 7:23:00 PM)

    Thank you Mam Savita...-I am truly happy for your feedback.🙂😊☺️❤️

  • Malabika Ray (2/11/2019 2:24:00 PM)

    Congratulations on your poem being selected POD. Beautiful, thought-provoking in a few words! (Report) Reply

  • Carl Roussell (2/11/2019 9:48:00 AM)

    Shadows meet when they are in the same place - congrats on your poem being selected as being POD (Report) Reply

    Jez Brul (2/11/2019 7:24:00 PM)

    True sir Carl...thank you for visiting..🙂😊

  • Sylvia Frances Chan (2/11/2019 9:43:00 AM)

    Shadows united, the best friendship ever has, smartest worded, Jez and so fondly pictured and presented.
    A heartwarming poem at its best. Most deserving You are so right very right. Your two last lines I cite here: Till my shadow meets yours,
    And your shadow meets are an adorable poetess, dear Jez! A myriad of 10´s for you.
    (Report) Reply

    Jez Brul (2/11/2019 7:26:00 PM)

    Dear mam Sylvia you filled my heart with warm delight...So glad to know that this simple poem touched your heart...thank you so much from the bottom of my heart.

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    (Report) Reply

  • Adrian Flett (2/11/2019 9:13:00 AM)

    The meeting of shadows a strong message of friendship in few words. (Report) Reply

    Jez Brul (2/11/2019 7:28:00 PM)

    Thank you sir Adrian...Stay happy.🙂☺️😊

  • (2/11/2019 7:50:00 AM)

    Wonderful conviction and confidence of bondage of relationship. Congrats on poem of the Day. (Report) Reply

  • (2/11/2019 7:25:00 AM)

    A meaningful poem on friendship. Parting is very difficult for beloved friends. Congrats being selected as POD (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (2/11/2019 7:13:00 AM)

    For I will quickly run to you,
    Till my shadow meets yours, very fine, short and very meaningful. tony
    (Report) Reply

  • Devanshu Patel (2/11/2019 7:12:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem...expressing the essence of real happiness...melting self...ego and gaining complete oneness...! My hearty congrats for being selected as POD... (Report) Reply

    Jez Brul (2/11/2019 7:34:00 PM)

    Thank you so much for your inspiring feedback...GBU🙂😊🙂

  • (2/11/2019 6:49:00 AM)

    Good friends shall always be so long as they see what they actually have? ......well penned Jez (Report) Reply

  • Aqua Flower (2/11/2019 5:29:00 AM)

    Breathtaking write! I can see the whole scene of love's torment. Congratulations for member poem of the day! ! ! xo (Report) Reply

  • Mahtab Bangalee (2/11/2019 3:51:00 AM)

    LOVELY poem and LOVELY 10++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Mahtab Bangalee (2/11/2019 3:51:00 AM)

    its really true LOVE for friend and true FRIENDSHIP TIE (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 14, 2018

Poem Edited: Friday, January 26, 2018

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