RieKairu Calo

Rookie - 0 Points (march 8,1995 / Philippines)

Just A Simple Love Story - Poem by RieKairu Calo

I saw his eyes today
Full of colors that can never sway
I wish he will sit next to me at class
I hope my heart would not crash

He has another love I know
That's why this pain always flow
My mind gave him up for a long time
But this my heart is still aiming for his love and it won't mind

I will never forget this morning
How he ask me to be with him and for me that is not just a thing
But happiness has always a storm
leaving me in the center of the core

I have nothing to do but cry in the night of my sorrow
I was surprised that he came by my window
He told me that it's always me and not her
But I never hear the word that can never called the pretender.

I don't care,
He told me he wants me! I know that it's not a dare
I'm pretty sure that tomorrow is our mystery
That in other people's eyes, it filled with a curiosity

But now what happened!
He almost took me for granted
I saw him with her,
What a nightmare for me as a thinker

Millions of tears falls in my eyes
Billion pieces of my heart that crash
My love assassinates me, I know
In what I feel, I think I should let go

The season of sadness is almost over
I think I should pack my bag and I will let my pain cover
I'm ready to face the world again
So that the terrible night will never happen

But why is he at my door?
I don't want think that he wants me to hurt more
I passed by him and he held me directly to my hand.
I heard the words that he chants...

'You've been always that girl that I want to sit with in class
Even sometimes I know my heart will crash.
I picked another girl to forget what I feel for you
But my plans always failed and my heart can't be cure.'

'I always pleasure that morning
When you said 'yes' to be with me and for me that is not just a thing.
But she came and be the storm
When I look at you, I want to be with you in the core.'

'I went by your window
To tell you I love you instead nothing has shown.
But wishing that time you understand
That what I've been telling you will never scam.'

'But when you see me with her that morning
you misunderstood it and miss the greatest scene.
I broke up with her to be with you
I guess what i tell you that night is few.'

'When you're gone you are breaking my heart
Waiting for your return so I can do my part
Every morning getting myself ready
To make my words so heavy.'

'Now you are hear I won't waste any second,
To tell you how much I love you and dreamed to love you with all my heart.
My love always grow every morning that it is the longest vine in the world.
Even sometimes this pain continues to crawl.'

'Please take my hand
To show you my world and let our love enhance
Smell the fragrance of my love,
You and me, The greatest thing that the world have.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about Just A Simple Love Story by RieKairu Calo

  • (9/19/2010 4:13:00 PM)

    Sweet story of young love. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • (8/9/2010 3:41:00 PM)

    very well conceived poem, well expressed ideas, (Report) Reply

  • (8/6/2010 11:03:00 PM)

    It's a good write, there are some very solid lines that really catch the reader. I like your writing and please never stop writing. You are only going to get better and better as time goes on. I really think you have a lot of talent that will shines as you keep writing. Lines and flow will fall into place naturally the more you write. Thank you for sharing :) (Report) Reply

  • (8/6/2010 10:10:00 AM)

    Hello distant friend!

    You have a young poetic heart, and a good feel for words. As far as I am concerned I do not believe the poetry is weak at all. You have to open your mind to what the poet is tRying to portray in their words BEFORE JUDGING. The thing is that you will come across some people who will like your poetry and some who will not NEVER STOP though. Continue to write every chance you get and you will notice the difference of where you were and what will become. Remember no one can express your words the way you can allow the flow of your mind to take over. THANKS FOR SHARING!

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  • (8/6/2010 9:09:00 AM)

    The tittle of the poem, to my undesrtanding of poetry, is too big for the content contained in this piece. I think that it is too much of a dare to called this what you call it. You could call this, 'The greatest love of your life.' This would make more sense for you are talking about the two of you and not all people in the world know this, so I could never be what your named it.

    The poetry is a little weak in some places, in others it reads like a prose poem than actual poetry. I gave you a seven for the effort you seemed to have put in the wriiting of this. Still you have to work a bit on you diction. When you write poetry, think poetry never do prose. Try to think of ways that you can be unique puting things into words.

    You are still quite young, so you have much time to develop as a poet. Work hard and never stop reading the better poets. I think this is good for now.

    Take care and the best to you.

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  • (8/6/2010 7:36:00 AM)

    Lissa Marie, thank you for sharing this love poem - it is absolutely heart-wrenching but it's beauty lies beneath it all also. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 4, 2010

Poem Edited: Monday, October 13, 2014

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