Kelly Kurt

Gold Star - 210,665 Points (1/14/1958 / Cedar Rapids Iowa)

Languid Day - Poem by Kelly Kurt

Daylight’s fleeting November sovereignty
Truncated by thick cloud cover
Leaves listless my Tuesday morning
Curtains open, but more light pours out than in
A steady rainfall pacifies, drowses
By late afternoon sunset, no diurnal light
Circadian rhythm in disarray
Languid day

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Comments about Languid Day by Kelly Kurt

  • Bill Galvin (11/19/2015 11:02:00 AM)

    I get it Kurt... no need to be touchy about definitions... I get it; November does that to me too. Thanks. (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/19/2015 1:17:00 AM)

    There is justification in title of the poem. So nicely presented. Great. (Report) Reply

  • (11/18/2015 8:44:00 PM)

    What you do best, poetically paint with words. That reach the eye and then the heart.
    Exquisite work!
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  • Wes Vogler (11/17/2015 11:57:00 PM)

    diurnal.. appearing during the day rather than at night
    circadian (rhythm) 24 hr cycle that tells the body when to
    sleep. Now I know. Keeping you humble (although I kinda liked it)
    gonna belt your average down with an 8
    (Report) Reply

    Souren Mondal (11/18/2015 1:27:00 AM)

    Sorry for getting in this, but that's soooo mean Wes: p

    Kelly Kurt (11/18/2015 12:02:00 AM)

    Ouch.: -) I have been rated worse. Thanks, Wes

  • Akhtar Jawad (11/17/2015 11:54:00 PM)

    Curtains open, but more light pours out than in
    A poet's microscopic view of a day, he calls it a languid day, simply wonderful.
    (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/18/2015 12:01:00 AM)

    When daylight hours are abbreviated, darkness during day makes night dominant. It affects me

  • Valsa George (11/17/2015 9:24:00 PM)

    A sunless day tells upon our moods! It is so natural that one grows languid on such days! If there is rain, it makes matters even worse! It is surprising to notice how the weather affects our moods! (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/17/2015 11:59:00 PM)

    I did nothing all day.

  • Souren Mondal (11/17/2015 1:57:00 PM)

    Apparently, for me, almost each day and me myself is too 'languid' and lazy.. Hard sometimed it is to make the time move... Thanks Kelly.. A fine poem.. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/17/2015 6:37:00 PM)

    It hasn't let up all day. Motivation is exactly 0
    Thanks Souren

  • Seema Jayaraman (11/17/2015 12:20:00 PM)

    More light pours out than in.. So typical of this November.. Me too.. I have been looking for a worthy inspiration but November has chosen not to revesl.. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/17/2015 6:39:00 PM)

    Dark as ink by 5: 00. Snow predicted for Friday. November can crush a spirit

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/17/2015 12:16:00 PM)

    Great imagery and nice theme, yet another Strong poem, Sir.10+++ (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/17/2015 6:40:00 PM)

    It is strange, how powerful the weather and daylight can be on us

  • (11/17/2015 12:13:00 PM)

    As you see it will appear.........Good one for me (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/17/2015 6:41:00 PM)

    Thanks, Darren.

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 17, 2015

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