Kelly Kurt

Gold Star - 196,933 Points (1/14/1958 / Cedar Rapids Iowa)

Leased Love (Senryu) - Poem by Kelly Kurt

I rented her heart
A deposit was required

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Senryu

Comments about Leased Love (Senryu) by Kelly Kurt

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (1/28/2016 11:20:00 AM)

    Intelligent writing, never thought about renting someone's heart.....10+++ (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (1/28/2016 4:15:00 PM)

    It wasn't intended to be temporary.: -)

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  • Edmund Strolis (1/28/2016 10:45:00 AM)

    We can give advise to look before you leap but let's be honest sometimes we just fall. As the saying goes it is not the fall that kills you it's the landing. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (1/28/2016 4:14:00 PM)

    The sudden stop at the end.: -)

  • Souren Mondal (1/28/2016 8:57:00 AM)

    We had all been there, once in our lives... A brilliant one Kelly.. Thank you for sharing.. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (1/28/2016 4:13:00 PM)

    Yes, a universal theme strikes a note in many

  • Wes Vogler (1/28/2016 2:19:00 AM)

    Good one Kelly .. maybe a classic. This is why we keep trying. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (1/28/2016 4:12:00 PM)

    Thanks, Wes. I like it when one really comes together

  • Valsa George (1/28/2016 12:10:00 AM)

    So..... it seems as good as owning it! (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (1/28/2016 1:38:00 AM)

    It was reposed and I took a loss on the deal.: -)

  • (1/27/2016 10:18:00 PM)

    Beautiful and realistic too. Is it the aftermath of acceptance of materialistic consumerism? Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (1/28/2016 1:37:00 AM)

    The deposit was a piece of my heart. No way to get that back.

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 27, 2016

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