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Love Again

Rating: 5.0

love makes you
feel like
you're on
top of the
world...
thats why we're
scared we'll fall too far
and too hard
when he's gone....

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rory Hudson 14 April 2009

Love is a he, eh? Delicate poem with considerable insight in it - needs to be a bit more poetic, though, I think.

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Saad Ansari 14 April 2009

try writing a bigger one. rather than one liner.. though i have not read all of your poems..

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Sadiqullah Khan 14 April 2009

You never fall with real love, so dont be affraid.keep writing, lovely, londowei.10

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Subroto Chatterjee 24 April 2009

Is that why you're blaming poor Cupid for the inevitable? ? Cheers. Subroto

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Janua Catt Alonzo 21 April 2009

Brief and concise yet with impact cause it did on me…very well written

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Stephen Raseona 17 April 2009

short and heart comforting, ....it's nice, i liked it....more fire

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Sicelo Sithole 17 April 2009

In the words of a great philosopher Francis Bacon 'Love is Philosophy', such matters are not simplke at all, they are something: fragile, above and beyond.. Well written. Regards, Vincent

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Ruth Walters 16 April 2009

Ahh that thing called love, so bitter sweet to the senses and so dangerous to the emotions. Don't ever give your all unless you're sure it will be returned in full or you're heading for that fall eh? I loved this little poem.

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