love makes you
top of the
thats why we're
scared we'll fall too far
and too hard
when he's gone....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
Love is a he, eh?
Delicate poem with considerable insight in it - needs to be a bit more poetic, though, I think.
try writing a bigger one. rather than one liner.. though i have not read all of your poems..
You never fall with real love, so dont be affraid.keep writing, lovely, londowei.10
Is that why you're blaming poor Cupid for the inevitable? ?
Brief and concise yet with impact cause it did on me…very well written
short and heart comforting, ....it's nice, i liked it....more fire
In the words of a great philosopher Francis Bacon 'Love is Philosophy', such matters are not simplke at all, they are something: fragile, above and beyond..
Ahh that thing called love, so bitter sweet to the senses and so dangerous to the emotions. Don't ever give your all unless you're sure it will be returned in full or you're heading for that fall eh? I loved this little poem.
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