Low Poem by Alexander Julian

Low

Rating: 5.0


This beat lifts on pulse.
My golden heart sinks in ash,
Draining wish for rise.

Monday, July 27, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: ash,attitude,belief,fixing,haiku,heart,heart love,looks,rhyme,sacrifice
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Soran M. H 27 July 2020

golden heart sinks in ash, Draining wish for rise

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Soran M. H 27 July 2020

Dear poet, hi... Really it is a poignant piece of work. with many poetic imagery, penned from the wisdom mind. kind regards keep writing and stay blessed 10/10

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Soran M. H 27 July 2020

you are always high with your sensitive heart, full of good poems and poetic feelings, this is amazing penned haiku by a skilful poem, you have a big 10+ and it goes onto my fav list

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