Kelly Kurt

Gold Star - 194,042 Points (1/14/1958 / Cedar Rapids Iowa)

Migrating Geese (Haiku) - Poem by Kelly Kurt

Fluttering chevron
Stalks the southward ebbing sun
Resounding claxons

Topic(s) of this poem: life, nature

Form: Haiku

Comments about Migrating Geese (Haiku) by Kelly Kurt

  • Valsa George (10/26/2015 11:11:00 PM)

    Enjoyed the usage.... 'Resounding claxons' to denote the sound produced by the migrating geese! Beautiful Haiku! (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (10/27/2015 1:04:00 AM)

    I really wanted to say honking as differently as I could. Thanks, Valsa

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  • (10/26/2015 1:10:00 AM)

    Reminds me of fighter aircraft flying in a V formation
    Thanks Kelly great haiku-10++
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    Kelly Kurt (10/26/2015 2:33:00 AM)

    Nearly as loud too. : -) Thanks

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/25/2015 11:30:00 PM)

    They are wonderful creature of God, they know where to go and when to go apart from how, So well written haiku. Loved it, Sir. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (10/26/2015 2:37:00 AM)

    Many flocks fly across the skies above me this time of year. Always fun to watch

  • Brian Mayo (10/25/2015 3:36:00 PM)

    I like it when they fly right over, low and quiet and for a moment you can hear the wind rushing over their feathers as they flap to gain altitude. Your haiku has a great beginning, a postcard middle, and an ending that puts the reader right smack dab in the thick of things. What more can someone ask for? (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (10/25/2015 4:01:00 PM)

    Thanks, Brian. A flock flew overhead at a low altitude as I was talking with a young friend. We could not hear each other til they passed

  • (10/25/2015 3:15:00 PM)

    It's true they make more noise,
    Than the horn of an old car,
    But the belief is that they're guided,
    By some migratory star,
    Like I think most poets are.

    You're poems Kelly, always stir up imagination and make us think
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    Kelly Kurt (10/25/2015 3:57:00 PM)

    thanks for another wonderful comment, Sandra

  • Pamela Sinicrope (10/25/2015 2:50:00 PM)

    The geese actually migrate to Rochester because we have a lake unnaturally heated by a power plant. They actually changed their migration pattern to winter here... and they're arriving now! (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (10/25/2015 3:56:00 PM)

    Enjoy their company. : -)

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/25/2015 2:43:00 PM)

    Geese migrate with wonderful vision as you clearly draw wise imagery here. Very interesting sharing done., , ,10 (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (10/25/2015 3:55:00 PM)

    Thanks, Kumarmani. I think I like it better when they come back north. : -)

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 25, 2015

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