Kelly Kurt

Gold Star - 194,030 Points (1/14/1958 / Cedar Rapids Iowa)

Migrating Geese (Haiku) - Poem by Kelly Kurt

Fluttering chevron
Stalks the southward ebbing sun
Resounding claxons

Topic(s) of this poem: life, nature

Form: Haiku

Comments about Migrating Geese (Haiku) by Kelly Kurt

  • Valsa George (10/26/2015 11:11:00 PM)

    Enjoyed the usage.... 'Resounding claxons' to denote the sound produced by the migrating geese! Beautiful Haiku! (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt Kelly Kurt (10/27/2015 1:04:00 AM)

    I really wanted to say honking as differently as I could. Thanks, Valsa

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  • (10/26/2015 1:10:00 AM)

    Reminds me of fighter aircraft flying in a V formation
    Thanks Kelly great haiku-10++
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    Kelly Kurt Kelly Kurt (10/26/2015 2:33:00 AM)

    Nearly as loud too. : -) Thanks

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/25/2015 11:30:00 PM)

    They are wonderful creature of God, they know where to go and when to go apart from how, So well written haiku. Loved it, Sir. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt Kelly Kurt (10/26/2015 2:37:00 AM)

    Many flocks fly across the skies above me this time of year. Always fun to watch

  • Brian Mayo (10/25/2015 3:36:00 PM)

    I like it when they fly right over, low and quiet and for a moment you can hear the wind rushing over their feathers as they flap to gain altitude. Your haiku has a great beginning, a postcard middle, and an ending that puts the reader right smack dab in the thick of things. What more can someone ask for? (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt Kelly Kurt (10/25/2015 4:01:00 PM)

    Thanks, Brian. A flock flew overhead at a low altitude as I was talking with a young friend. We could not hear each other til they passed

  • (10/25/2015 3:15:00 PM)

    It's true they make more noise,
    Than the horn of an old car,
    But the belief is that they're guided,
    By some migratory star,
    Like I think most poets are.

    You're poems Kelly, always stir up imagination and make us think
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    Kelly Kurt Kelly Kurt (10/25/2015 3:57:00 PM)

    thanks for another wonderful comment, Sandra

  • Pamela Sinicrope (10/25/2015 2:50:00 PM)

    The geese actually migrate to Rochester because we have a lake unnaturally heated by a power plant. They actually changed their migration pattern to winter here... and they're arriving now! (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt Kelly Kurt (10/25/2015 3:56:00 PM)

    Enjoy their company. : -)

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/25/2015 2:43:00 PM)

    Geese migrate with wonderful vision as you clearly draw wise imagery here. Very interesting sharing done., , ,10 (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt Kelly Kurt (10/25/2015 3:55:00 PM)

    Thanks, Kumarmani. I think I like it better when they come back north. : -)

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 25, 2015

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