Sayeed Abubakar

Gold Star - 13,308 Points (21 September 1972 / Jessore / Bangladesh)

Opening Your Window - Poem by Sayeed Abubakar

Opening your window,
look at the Sun, Lorena, in your Mexico
in the morning each day.
You will find the Sun with red rosy ray.
This ray is my love she borrowed from me.
I saw this Sun in Bangladesh which now you see.

Opening your window,
look at the Moon, Lorena, in your Mexico
at night. You will find the silver-
Moon beautiful with her
white ray. This ray is my love she borrowed from me.
I saw this Moon in Bangladesh which now you see.

Topic(s) of this poem: love, love and life


Poet's Notes about The Poem

We are so far but every day we see the same Sun and at moonlit night the same Moon.

Comments about Opening Your Window by Sayeed Abubakar

  • Sallam Yassin (1/8/2013 9:19:00 AM)


    artistic
    and magical way
    to say i love u
    thanks to share
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  • Arthur Alexandra Apeh (12/29/2012 11:47:00 AM)


    Oh yes! if the sky we both see even as the distance set us apart can deliver my message to you before our day, then it shall be my pride and not my proud to be with you. (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (12/28/2012 5:13:00 AM)


    What a beautiful way of thinking, you allow the sun and moon to be your messenger to send your love to Lorena!
    Outstanding write!
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  • Valsa George (12/28/2012 1:25:00 AM)


    Your imagination is great! So your lady love will be seeing you day and night! A very clever way of bonding! ! (Report) Reply

  • Tapera Makadho (12/27/2012 8:33:00 AM)


    The sun and the moon give light to the world and what illuminates in her heart is your love, i like the comparison. Nice poem! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 27, 2012

Poem Edited: Sunday, November 8, 2015


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